Sweet Apple scene redraw

So, I've really been doubting my improvement of late, I decided to try and redraw a scene from the first ever pony picture I drew, which can be found here

Not sure if I will continue it, I was getting more and more depressed as it went on and it took so long to do..

Let me know what you think but I don't think that it's much better than the original that was drawn at least a year ago.

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